Sunday, 1 May 2011

Me and my awesomeness

Yea I found this story that I wrote in Yr 7. I think that it showcases my brillance in general. Thought I should share it with you. ( It's a write a story based on the pictures that were given to us story.)
Flanigi O'Beaver and his wife Jasmin were happy together in quintin land.
The evil snake lord came and bit Flanigi.
"och" wisphered Flanigi, "Im going to get some rest".
"While you get some rest I'm going to look for the mysterious flower," shouted Jasmin
 The day was very sunny and Jasmin was very hot, thirsty and tired. Jasmin jumped off her horse and fell asleep imediately.
While Jasmin was asleep an evil wolf  killed Jasmin's horse.( I don't know why I thought it was a wolf when it clearly looks like a pig) The wolf was just about to pounce on Jasmin when she woke.
Jasmin picked up her blood-shedder axe and slayed the fox with one good blow. (Yea the wolf turned into a fox, probably had magical powers or something) Blood was everywhere but Jasmin didn't mind becuase she was going to have wolf for breakfast.(Probably turned back into a wolf when she killed it. Just guessing.)




She woke up and and set out. It was boilng hot and she had to walk through the desert for two scorchers.



Finally she came to a river and had to cut down a tree and make a boat so she could sail to the other side.



She ended up sailing for two days non-stop. (Must have been a pretty big river she had to cross) When she finally reached the other side it was sunny.



It was getting late and it started to rain so she slept underneath the canoe. ( the boat probably had magical powers too)
Finally after avery long timed she found the 'Mysterious Flower' and said "Jolly got show!" She called out "TANEFA!" (because i didn't know how to spell taniwha) and she magically warped back home.




Jasmin gave the flower to Flanigi O'Beaver and he said "I don't like flowers". They lived like kings and queens for the rest of her life.



THE END!!!

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